Wow hey, that was an experience!
I always like to comment with an interpretation of the story of the VN, when is possible.
Here, I felt like the story was about pregnancy, birth, and it’s psychological effects on humans. It makes a lot of sense! The father feels the need to provide to the child, while the mother… umm, well, play the VN and see by yourself. XD
I didn’t really have a metaphor in mind when I wrote it
In my opinion, there’s almost always a purpose or something you want to tell the world, and it’s sad when that message doesn’t reach your audience, don’t you think?.
The thing is, if you write a story without a metaphor or a meaning in mind, then your story can mean just about anything.
You’d be impressed by how many ways a reader can interpret a story! And misinterpretation is risky, so is worth spending a bit of time on that. That’s my advice. ^^
I think that if the story makes you project a meaning onto it, then it was a successful story! And any meaning you put on it is constrained by the events of the story itself. So the interpretations you get to are actually guided by the plot and characters combined with your personal experience. And since everyone's experience is different, there will be different emotional reactions and ways to see the story.
When I wrote this I only had an emotion to guide me through it, and that was what I wanted to come through
Man, this was a super gnarly read. And definitely did not end how I expected... wow. There needs to be more VNs like this and/or I read too many slice of life that I consider this to be a break.
Hello, thanks for reading, I'm happy that you found it an interesting read! I don't have most of my games on there cause they are very old and I don't like them as much anymore
I did the gameplay and to be honest i was quite surprised by the actual storry. It was creepy most of the time but also funny at moments imo :) good game
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Wow hey, that was an experience!
I always like to comment with an interpretation of the story of the VN, when is possible.
Here, I felt like the story was about pregnancy, birth, and it’s psychological effects on humans. It makes a lot of sense! The father feels the need to provide to the child, while the mother… umm, well, play the VN and see by yourself. XD
I’m interpreting this the right way fullmontis?
I think that's a good interpretation! Although I didn't really have a metaphor in mind when I wrote it
Yay thanks!
In my opinion, there’s almost always a purpose or something you want to tell the world, and it’s sad when that message doesn’t reach your audience, don’t you think?. The thing is, if you write a story without a metaphor or a meaning in mind, then your story can mean just about anything. You’d be impressed by how many ways a reader can interpret a story! And misinterpretation is risky, so is worth spending a bit of time on that. That’s my advice. ^^
I think that if the story makes you project a meaning onto it, then it was a successful story! And any meaning you put on it is constrained by the events of the story itself. So the interpretations you get to are actually guided by the plot and characters combined with your personal experience. And since everyone's experience is different, there will be different emotional reactions and ways to see the story.
When I wrote this I only had an emotion to guide me through it, and that was what I wanted to come through
Oooh impressive!, it’s actually a great way to see it. Emotion driven stories then, I’ll check it. Thank you so much.
Man, this was a super gnarly read. And definitely did not end how I expected... wow. There needs to be more VNs like this and/or I read too many slice of life that I consider this to be a break.
Sidenote as I don't have any other place to put this: Why are only half of your games on your creator page (https://fullmontis.itch.io/) versus all 21 (or at least a lot more) on your profile page (https://itch.io/profile/fullmontis)?
Hello, thanks for reading, I'm happy that you found it an interesting read! I don't have most of my games on there cause they are very old and I don't like them as much anymore
That was a really neat little story with a great ending. Nicely done!
omg, I love your work!! The story was amazing and so intense. I'm going to remember it for a long while.
Thank you, happy to know you liked it
Inquietante, coinvolgente e...scritto benissimo. Il senso di disagio a tratti l'ho sentito fisicamente :) ben fatto
Molto gentile, grazie per il commento :)
I did the gameplay and to be honest i was quite surprised by the actual storry. It was creepy most of the time but also funny at moments imo :) good game
Thank you for the feedback!
you're wellcome it was a pleasure playing the game :)